Exercise 2

5) "Who can't even CONCENTRATE TO WRITE this because her little sister will NOT shut up," announces the narrator illustrating the harsh reality to her life.

6) Lynda uses lyrical words and is poetic.

7)  By the way Barry starts her story kind of foreshadows what the story will be like by what she says, "cruddy time on a cruddy street"

Of the paragraphs I read, I liked Vivir, Sonar, Leer's post the most.  She is very descriptive and uses strong vocabulary.